Rare Malt Moon
Not to silver---that is the winter moon,given to a freshly minted shine.Not to the red or orangethat are leaves before the fall,or pumpkin ripe for the picking.Not to the whiteSo often seen to...
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The title is perfect.And i enjoyed the seasonal moons of this work as they are described wonderfully and with beauty.But it is the final stanza that holds the power, which fulfills.
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I think your last strophe is the poem. Your first line had me confused as to whether it should be "too" or "to". You might consider some trimming.dave
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Thanks Blue---And thanks Dave...good to meet you. Gonna look this over again!
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returning the compliment...the ending is perfect....ooooohhhhh yeslouisa womans cuponce filled is emptied only by desireto be a new thingjust the act in introspectionand in sight of being nowand all...
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Thank you Dear...but I wonder if a woman can simply trade the status the one vessel for another. Once you've sipped the good stuff, coca cola will never pass for wine!
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its known the touch is sometimes enough...there is no loss...if anything its a salve...no need to abraid the emotion...nor make it less...the true loves touch is more than equal minds can find...or...
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you stop me sometimes in my daythe stars are more that pointsof lightand the flesh is morethan easily understood.your words are a coat you makeand something you take inside.its rare to watch the...
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Wow.yes...I know Cass. She has vast talent---and I take this reply as a huge compliment.Poetry is about taking whats inside you, and clueing the world in, so to speak. To my way of thinking, love is...
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Very good imagery of seasons and colors. Well expounded subject of depth. Enjoyed the read very much.Donnabeth
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A good malted brew of lunar love. Fervent and fermented in many seasons mash.
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